Frozen Dessert Butterfly Patches

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.  Here is your critique.

Overview - We have three butterfly patches that were made for ice cream flavors.  I chose to critique this feature because they are butterflies and I am an entomologist. These are amazing.  This is a very novel idea and I have never heard of it being done before.

Neopolitan Butterfly - This is my least favorite of the three and it is the least lifelike of the three.  The pink area looks too squarish for me.  Your skill is fantastic and I like the brown color. The bottom wings are too small. Great job.

Watermelon Butterfly - This butterfly doesn't exist in nature but it should.  I really like the color scheme and it looks so beautiful.  There are a lot of colorful butterflies out there. Still, I will remember this one.  It looks like a butterfly and it is well made. The bottom wing is too small but that is okay.
You did an excellent job here.

Mango Butterfly - I have seen butterflies like this in nature. You did an excellent job in copying it. I like the color scheme. It is well proportioned.  Fantastic job.  

Conclusion - These are fantastic creations. I hope I wasn't too entomological for you. I hope you continue your career for a long time to come.  I really enjoyed critiquing you.  Have a great day.